Tuesday, April 7, 2015

My Plan Essay

Due Dates:Typed Draft April 9, Final on April 14

My Plan Essay
The Extended Application (EA) is an Oregon graduation requirement.  In Portland Public Schools, the EA is fulfilled when, during their senior year, students write a “My Plan Essay”. This is a formal reflection of a student’s high school experiences related to college and career, future plans, and goals. The My Plan Essay supports the district’s goal for every PPS student to graduate college and career ready with an informed post-high school plan. When you receive a meeting score on your essay, you will need to upload it to your Naviance account.

In your My Plan Essay, you will need to address the following three areas:
  1. Explain your career aspirations and your educational plan to meet these goals. Clearly articulate both short and long term goals and describe the interests, skills, and experiences that helped you develop your post-high school plan.
  2. Explain how you have helped your family or made your community a better place to live. Provide specific examples and include what you learned from these experiences. How did these experiences help to inform your post-high school plan?
  3. Describe a personal accomplishment and the strengths and skills you used to achieve it. Consider your growth during your four years in high school. How will this experience serve you in your future?

Must score a “Meets” or better in all areas to meet requirements
Exceeds
Meets
Needs Improvement
Ideas & Content
·  Each of the three areas identified in the prompt is addressed thoroughly.
·  Evidence is thorough, in-depth, and insightful.
·  Supporting details are rich, interesting and carefully chosen for audience and purpose.
·  Each of the three areas identified in the prompt is addressed.
·   Shows evidence of new learning, ideas, results, or conclusions appropriate to the student’s personal, academic, and/or career interests and post-high school goals.
·   Main ideas are supported with specific details.
·  One or more of the three main areas identified in the prompt is not addressed.
·   Evidence is weak, incomplete, inappropriate, or limited in some way.
·   Supporting details may be too general or off topic.
·   Essay may be too short, without enough ideas or details
Organization
·  The reader can follow the writing easily; ideas and details are placed in an order that moves the reader right along.
·  Connecting words and phrases: smooth; effective; make the writing easy to follow from one part to the next.
·  Paragraph breaks are used effectively.
·  The reader can follow the writing; ideas and details are placed in an order that makes sense.
·  Connecting words and phrases help the reader follow from one part to the next.
·  Paragraph breaks are there and are helpful.
·  The reader has a hard time following the writing and may be confused often; ideas and details are not in an order that makes sense.
·  Connecting words and phrases are repetitive; points may be numbered or bulleted.
·  Few or no paragraph breaks
Spelling
Punctuation
Grammar
·  May be a few minor errors.
·  Some errors, but few major errors; the most important rules are followed most of the time.
· So many basic errors that the reader has a hard time figuring out what the writer is trying to say.


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